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Essay Topics Shopping

Shopping is unavoidable in this modern world. Many people choose shopping as their hobby as it easier and it gives pleasure and it replaced other activities. In this essay I will explain in detail about various reason why people selecting shopping as their hobby and its positive development.

One of main reason people choose shopping as their hobby is cheaper if they buy household goods as wholesale for each weekend. It reduces burden of missing some product f hey buy monthly. Due to high income and technology revolution, people buy new gadget and household equipments which is easier to handle and reduces their valuable time. Increase in giving gifts to their deer ones by getting specific present. Moreover, more awareness about personality and beauty products among people which results in steady increase in buying new cosmetics and costumes. For example, my mother was passionate about sarees and jewelries which result in buy different varieties of new sarees and jewelries to add in her collections.

Positive development of shopping are people high alert about prices about different new products in many shops due to frequent visits. Helps people to gain profound knowledge about each product in the shops. It also helps to increase communication skills with strangers. Searching for particular product and often visits to the shops helps to be fit. It helps to be good negotiator because of continuous negotiation with the shoppers. For example, my brother more involved in shopping, knows all the products and its prices helps him to negotiate well with the shoppers and get cheaper price all his products.

In a nutshell, shopping is a positive development if people spend limited amount for it. As discussed, there are various reason motivates people always involve in shopping. It helps to be smart, intelligent in this competitive world.

jurgita  

Mar 4, 2009   #1

Shopping
Firstly, shopping is necessity thing in ours life. Because we need something: food, clothes, shoes, and something...
Like every girl I enjoy my time shopping because I like to renew my wardrobe and update my style. I prefer to walk around shops, relax, and concentrate on my shopping. However, shopping would get to dull if it became my daily routine. I feel nervous when I can't find what I want. Sometimes shopping can be time when you feel relax, and sometimes you feel angry.

Secondly I have to talk about looking after money. Sometimes I spend my money later, but now I am trying spending the money on time. I want to have money all the time, and I buy something, when I have a lot of money.

Of course my parents allow me to spend money on what I want. For example the money I can spend for apparels, for cosmetics or party. Hence, my parents give me the freedom to use the money, to understand that if I spend all the money today, tomorrow I can not buy anything.

Nonetheless everyone wants to be richer and happier. My family probably would be happier if we would be very wealthy. But money is not important and now we are living well.

What are the exact instructions for this assignment? Please post what your instructions were so that we can critique papers with some frame of reference.

Firstly, shopping is a necessary thing in our livesbecause we need things like food, clothes, or shoes.

---what are you trying to say here, exactly?---
"Sometimes shopping can be time when you feel relax, and sometimes you feel angry."
---Perhaps you could change it to this---
"Sometimes shopping can be a time when you feel relaxed, but sometimes you can feel angry."

Secondly, I have to talk about fiscal responsibility.

---What do you mean by "spending the money on time"? Do you have a deadline by which your money must be spent?---

"Sometimes I spend my money later, but now I am trying spending the money on time."

---This is not a complete sentence. Add a verb :)---
"For example the money I can spend for apparels, for cosmetics or party."

---I would be hesitant to use the word "hence" here because it implies that you are making an inference from a previously stated fact. I don't think you could make that sort of inference here.---

"Hence, my parents give me the freedom to use the money, to understand that if I spend all the money today, tomorrow I can not buy anything."

(By the way, how do you make red letters? It better not be some special thing that only moderators can do, lol. :D)

OP jurgita  

Mar 4, 2009   #3

Thank you very much, you really helped me to correct a mistakes :)*

Firstly, shopping is a necessity in modern life, because we need things: food, clothes, shoes, and so forth.

However, shopping would get too dull if it became my daily routine. I feel nervous when I can't find what I want. Sometimes shopping can be time when you feel relaxed , and sometimes you feel angry.

Secondly, I have to talk about looking after money. Sometimes I spend my money too quickly, but now I am trying spending the money wisely. I want to have money all the time, but I lose it quickly if I buy something whenever I have a lot of money.

... that if I spend all the money today, tomorrow I cannot buy anything.
Nonetheless everyone wants to be richer and happier. My family probably would be happier if we were very wealthy, but money is not the most important thing, and now we are living well.

At the end you should add one more sentence about shopping. :)

What exactly is the point of your essay? You say you like shopping, but you also say shopping can have its negative qualities. Then you talk about managing money. You need a clear thesis to work with. In fact, the entire "firstly," secondly," thing would seem to be labeling body paragraphs. An introductory paragraph might come in handy.



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